Today in the lesson we looked over the amount of filming that our group had covered over the half term holiday, we took this and went up to the computer room. Here we started to look at editing techniques and how certain features could be used to enchance the quality of our piece.
We used various software programmes on one of our group member’s laptop, starting to play around with how certain filmed scenes could be placed together. We also started to pick out the certain parts of the filming that we reguarded to be better than others, narrowing it down so we had our final filming placed together.
We also started to piece together how the next scene of our Film Noir piece would be like, by starting to lay down some basic features of how we wanted this scene to look like.
We also looked at the actions and camera shots of our storyboard:
Frame 1: Woman leaving apartment
Actions: The woman walks out of an apartment acting suspicious, wrapping herself in her coat for security. She’s very alert and jumpy and acting as though she has done something wrong and is trying to hide it.
- Wide shot- location
- Medium close up – body language, face expression
- Medium long shot – her beginning to walk off
- Footsteps of her heels
- Natural street sounds
Frame 2: Woman passing man
Actions: The woman bumps into a dark hooded figure, smoking a pipe, who emerges from the darkness and leans against a wall of a street corner. The woman seems a little taken back but apologizes and continues to walk down the street.
- Wide shot – location, characters
- Close up – man’s shadowed face, women’s face expressions
- Tracking shot – women walking
Dialogue: Women: “Oh sorry.” (Man puffs smoke in her face)
Frame 3: Woman looking behind
Actions: As the woman walks down the street she begins to get paranoid that she is being followed as she hears footsteps, so she speeds up her walking pace. The woman then hears the footsteps getting louder (closer) so she stops and looks behind her, to find no one there, so she continues to walk slowly, getting faster and she begins to creep herself out after hearing noises.
- Point of view shot – showing what she see
- Mid shot – the figure behind her
- Close up – man’s feet/ woman’s feet
- Street cat
Frame 4: Woman running
Actions: The woman turns around and see’s a figure acting suspicious and not very far away from her. So she turns a corner and speeds up her pace which turns in to a run.
- Shaky camera – running (point of view of women & man)
- Close up – feet running (women & man)
- Music getting louder and tense/mysterious
- Heavy breathing
Frame 5: The alley way
Actions: The woman turns another corner and stops to catch her breath, she peers around the corner to see if she could see the figure but there’s no sign. As she turns around the dark figure then steps out in front of the woman after taking a short cut and pushes her into an alley way. All that is visible in the frame is the darkness of the alley way.
- Point of view shot – woman looking around the corner
- Close up – woman’s face
- Medium long shot – darkness of the alley way
- Medium close up/ 2 shot – women turning into the man
- Heavy breathing – woman
Frame 6: The shadow of the killer
Actions: The women struggles to get away from him but manages it, and runs out of the alley way. The man then steps out of the alley way and pulls out his pistol and shoots the women, leaving her lying in the street. (Don’t actually see the man shoot the women, you see his shadow.)
- Medium close up – shadow of the man shooting the woman
- Medium long shot of the alley way
- Tense music – violins
- Struggling noises
- Gunshot – breaks music sequence